What choice moments of SA or general cool-ness would you like to see in the flash theme song I'm working on? Here's my progress so far:
http://doomgirlmeg.deviantart.com/art/SA-Opening-So-far-69863552

It's not bad really, but sorry I'm gonna have to be pretty critical on it:
the little yellow shining effect you have at the beggining isn't as smooth as it could be and I think the transition from the beggining to the title is a little too quick and the title just pops up out of no where. I think having the yellow fill up the screen then fade out to the text would be good
the background sky is just one color, I'd reccomend using a linear which I saw you used in the next scene then adjust it yourself, http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/288242 like so
the clouds are very geh, if you had Flash 8 you can do alot with the filters, ala blur which make it look pretty good, but I'm not sure which flash version your using
I like the font you used for the text, but wish there was a little more like a shine or something
the symbol the same, lighting shine something would be good
when the characters appear the radial is a little tacky, don't have the color go to a white instead I think it be good to use the choice color with a darker version of it or lighter. Uh... what I mean is this looks better no?

Really it's not bad, but it could be a lot better.


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